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11．最近從媒體報(bào)道的一些家庭事件來看，孩子與父母的關(guān)系不和諧，隔閡越來越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理．針對(duì)這個(gè)問題，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)社開展了主題為"與父母和諧相處"的征文大賽．作為一名初中畢業(yè)生，你一定有自己的思想與辨別是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想過應(yīng)該怎樣和自己的父母相處呢？請(qǐng)以"How to Get on Well with Our Parents？"為題寫一篇短文參加此次征文大賽．
一．寫作要點(diǎn)提示
1．與父母和諧相處很重要．
2．與父母和諧相處的做法或建議
（1）理解與尊重父母（如傾聽與有禮貌表達(dá)想法）；
（2）多與父母交流（如分享快樂與傾訴煩惱）；
（3）與父母和諧相處的感受．
二．寫作要求
短文應(yīng)緊扣要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使短文銜接、連貫，詞數(shù)控制在80-100詞．
How to Get on Well with Our Parents
It's very important for us to get on well with our parents．But how can we get along well with our parents．Here is some of my advice．
We should understand and respect our parents．Parents talk much because they care about us．We are supposed to listen to them．When we want to tell them our opinions，we'd better be in a polite way．We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems．When we are free，we'd better help them do some things．
I get on well with my parents．I enjoy sharing everything with my parents．My parents are like my best friends．They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble．We love each other．
Let's get on well with our parents because they are our parents．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's very important for us to get on well with our parents對(duì)于我們來說與父母和諧相處很重要．it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．
【高分句型二】
Parents talk much because they care about us父母說那么多是因?yàn)樗麄冊(cè)诤跷覀儯?br />because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句

解答 How to Get on Well with Our Parents
It's very important for us to get on well with our parents．【高分句型一】（與父母和諧相處很重要） But how can we get along well with our parents．Here is some of my advice．
We should understand and respect our parents．Parents talk much because they care about us．【高分句型二】We are supposed to listen to them．（理解與尊重父母）When we want to tell them our opinions，we'd better be in a polite way．（多與父母交流）We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems．When we are free，we'd better help them do some things．
I get on well with my parents．I enjoy sharing everything with my parents．My parents are like my best friends．They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble．We love each other．（與父母和諧相處的感受．）
Let's get on well with our parents because they are our parents．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文第一段提出觀點(diǎn)：與父母融洽相處很重要．開門見山，直奔主題．第二段是對(duì)如何與父母融洽相處的建議，詳略得當(dāng)，重點(diǎn)突出，中心明確．第三段談?wù)撟约旱纳�活感受；最后�?hào)召人們同父母融洽相處結(jié)尾．短文層次清楚，語言連貫．短文用should，be supposed to，had better等等不同的形式來表示人們的責(zé)任與義務(wù)，生動(dòng)具體．其中用到的動(dòng)詞不定式，時(shí)間狀語從句，賓語從句等，也增加了本文的文采．