Question

請(qǐng)從90后初中生的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行客觀的描述，然后制定個(gè)人將來(lái)的目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃。

優(yōu) 點(diǎn)	缺 點(diǎn)	目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃
1. 當(dāng)別人遇到麻煩時(shí)經(jīng)常 樂(lè)于助人； 2. 活躍，對(duì)新鮮的事物感 興趣； 3. ……	1. 易激動(dòng)、發(fā)怒； 2. 因粗心而常犯 同樣的錯(cuò)誤； 3. ……	1. 理想是成為……； 2. 我已努力……； 3. 我相信……。

具體要求：

1. 目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃需用３句話展開合理想象并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。

3. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù), 100詞左右。

　 As post-90 students, we                                                       

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As post-90 students, we are often willing to help others when they are in trouble. We are active and very interested in something new. We like to do things differently.

We are easy to get excited and angry.  We often make the same mistakes because we are very careless. Sometimes we only think about our own feelings.

My dream is to be a teacher. I have tried my best to keep a balance between study and hobbies. I believe my dream will come true.  

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將初中生的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)介紹清楚，并介紹自己將來(lái)的目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃，注意根據(jù)材料合理想象，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。日常學(xué)習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，熟記一些經(jīng)典句型，考試時(shí)就能有所參照，有的放矢。