Question

“Great Changes in My Hometown ”為題用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文描述家鄉(xiāng)小鎮(zhèn)所發(fā)生的變化。
過(guò)去我住的一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)周圍都是樹(shù)，沒(méi)有高樓。那里的人們過(guò)著貧窮的生活�！　�
現(xiàn)在家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了巨變，你到處能看到高樓大廈和工廠，許多人有了自駕車。
但空氣和水污染也變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重，山不綠了，水不凈了，天不藍(lán)了
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Great Changes in My Hometown

Answer 1

I used to live in a small town with trees all around. There were no tall buildings. People there lived a poor life. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. You can see tall buildings and factories everywhere. Many people have their own cars. But air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. The mountains are not green, the rivers are not clean, and the sky is not blue. I think we must do something to stop pollution. I hope my hometown will be more beautiful in the future.

這是一篇給材料作文要求寫一篇介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)從過(guò)去到現(xiàn)在發(fā)生的一些變化。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。由于是介紹過(guò)去到現(xiàn)在的變化，故應(yīng)特別注意時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用，介紹過(guò)去一般用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，介紹現(xiàn)在用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，展望將來(lái)則用將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。寫作中注意表達(dá)的先后順序，語(yǔ)義的 連貫性，注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)的慣用句式，固定短語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用，不犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。短文結(jié)尾要根據(jù)自己的看法，發(fā)表一點(diǎn)對(duì)于將來(lái)的展望，最少要寫兩句話，注意將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用。寫好后多讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。