Question

11．假如你叫李華，是班長．你班將要組織一次郊游（a school trip）．請你根據(jù)下面的提示問題給外教Johnson寫一封郵件，邀請他參加你們的活動并告訴他你們的安排．
提示問題：
●Where and when will you go？
●How will you go there？（By train？By bus？…）
●What will you do？
●When will you come back？
提示詞語：relax，take a walk，play games，plants，animals
Dear Mr．Johnson，
Our class will have a school trip．Would you like to come with us？The followings are our plans．
                                                    
We will be very happy if you can join us．Look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's about 20 kilometers from our school，so we will go there by bus．離我們學校大約20千米，所以我們乘坐汽車．
so所以，不能與because連用．
【高分句型二】
We will relax ourselves in the park，such as taking a walk with friends and playing games我們會在公園放松放松，例如和朋友散步玩游戲．
such as例如，舉出例子．

解答 Dear Mr．Johnson，
Our class will have a school trip．Would you like to come with us？The followings are our plans．
We will go to Xishan Forest Park next Saturday．（時間和地點）It is a very large national forest park in Beijing．It's about 20 kilometers from our school，so we will go there by bus．【高分句型一】（交通方式）We will relax ourselves in the park，such as taking a walk with friends and playing games．【高分句型二】We will also get to know about plants and animals in the park．（活動）We will stay there for four hours and will come back at about 4 p．m．（返回時間）
We will be very happy if you can join us．Look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 寫作時先要圍繞這些要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點全部表達出來，并且要有適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點時，要結(jié)合活動內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點．