Question

書面表達(dá)（共1小題；滿分20分）

在陽光雨露里，我已長高、長壯，但這還不是全部，長大還應(yīng)包括什么？是關(guān)心、幫助同學(xué)？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、回報親朋師長？還是……，成長的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記。請以I Am Not a Child Any More為題，記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表明你已經(jīng)不再是一個下孩子。

要求：1.請根據(jù)所給題目，用英語寫一篇短文，不少于80詞；

2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；

3.文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)算

I am not a child any more,

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I am not a child any more

I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.

It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet.

My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”

It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。記述成長過程中的一件或是兩件難忘的事，根據(jù)材料提示完成寫作，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作過程中注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:：used to“過去常常”；not...until“直到……才”；not...any more“不再”；grow up“長大”等以及一些復(fù)合句的使用。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。