Question

【題目】深圳是一座美麗的現(xiàn)代化城市。請根據(jù)下面的要點提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文介 紹這座城市。要求包含所有要點，適當發(fā)揮，語句通順，書寫整潔。

要點如下：

1.深圳有很多主題公園，例如歡樂谷（The Happy Valley)、世界之窗（Window of the World）等；

2. 深圳有漂亮的海景，人們可以去海里游泳；

3. 深圳逛街的地方很多，還有很多美味的食物。

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Answer 1

【答案】Shenzhen is a beautiful and modern city in South China. A lot of people come here for work, shopping and sightseeing every year. There are many theme parks in Shenzhen, such as the Happy Valley, Window of the World and so on. People can enjoy themselves in these theme parks. Visitors can also enjoy the beautiful sea around Shenzhen, and it is great fun to swim

in the sea. There are many places for shopping in Shenzhen, and the visitors can buy almost anything they want. They can also enjoy all kinds of delicious food here. Welcome to Shenzhen!

【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)要點提示用英文介紹深圳這座美麗的現(xiàn)代化城市。由于是城市介紹，因此時態(tài)運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第三人稱。寫作中會用到There be句型，要注意句子的主語的變化及主謂一致的問題。多種句式的交替使用，會增加文章的亮點，連詞的合理使用，會使文章更順暢。