Question

假如你叫王敏，是某中學(xué)初三年級(jí)學(xué)生。你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Jim發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件，告訴你他將于明年二月來(lái)中國(guó)旅游，并決定來(lái)杭州和你呆一周。但他有些情況不清楚, 請(qǐng)你給他回一封電子郵件。 (詞數(shù)：70個(gè)左右。) 郵件必須包含以下要點(diǎn)：
☆Feb 6^th- Feb 24^th free (winter vacation) 
☆Meet him at Hangzhou International Airport.
☆What’s the weather like in Hangzhou?    
☆Plan four activities during his stay in Hangzhou.
Reference (參考)
靈隱寺 Lingyin Temple   西溪濕地 Xixi Wetland Park 
雷峰塔 Leifeng Pagod    龍井茶  Longjing Tea
絲綢博物館 Silk Museum 科技博物館 Science Museum  …  
Dear Jim,
I’m so excited that you will come to China _______________________________________ Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Wang Min

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I am so excited that you’ll come to China and stay with me for a week during February．
I’ll be free from February 6th to February 24th  because it’s our winter vacation and I will have much time to be with you．
When you come, I’ll meet you at Hangzhou International Airport．You worried about the weather here in your email．In fact, the weather here is a little cold in winter. So you need to take some warm clothes with you．During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of great interest, such as Lingyin Temple and Leifeng Pagoda. Of course we won’t miss the West Lake. If you’re interested in animals, we can visit the zoo. There we can see lovely pandas. We’ll also taste Longjing Tea so that you can know more about the culture and customs here．I’m sure we’ll have a very good time together．
Looking forward to meeting you soon．
Yours,
Wang Min

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封回信。本題給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。