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4．如今學(xué)生們依賴父母的庇護(hù)，每天的任務(wù)就是努力學(xué)習(xí)取得好成績(jī)，將來(lái)進(jìn)入一所好的大學(xué)，在家不愿做家務(wù)，不會(huì)關(guān)心父母，不體諒父母的辛苦，有篇文章寫得好，沒有傘的孩子才會(huì)努力奔跑．請(qǐng)你以We should help parents do housework為題目，寫出學(xué)生們的在家里的普遍現(xiàn)象，你在家常做哪些家務(wù)，你對(duì)此事的體會(huì)和看法．
要求：
1．表達(dá)清晰，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2．必須包括上文中所提到的要求，并做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮．
3．詞數(shù)：80詞左右（文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）4．不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they don't have time to help their parents with the housework現(xiàn)在許多學(xué)生說(shuō)他們太忙了他們的學(xué)習(xí)，他們沒有時(shí)間幫助他們的父母做家務(wù)．too…to…太…而不能…加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣．
句型二：Sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents分擔(dān)家務(wù)有助于我們與父母建立良好的關(guān)系．it is+形容詞+for sb to do sth固定句型．

解答 Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they don't have time to help their parents with the housework【高分句型一】．I don't think they are true，that's all excuses．（表明自己的觀點(diǎn)）
      In my opinion，doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility．It can also make us independent．We can't depend on others all our life．Sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents【高分句型二】．I think trying to do some housework can keep us healthy and strong，some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise．And we can take care of ourselves better when we grow up．
      On weekdays，I often help my parents clean my bed room every morning and wash dishes after supper．At weekends，washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty．And I also help my parents carry something heavy from the supermarket．
      As the saying goes'One can't make a big success without being self reliant'，so I think that students should often share the housework in our daily life．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)．要求介紹．同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．溫馨提醒：必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．