Question

1．假如你是李華，在三年的初中生活中，給你留下深刻印象的人是你最好的朋友Ann，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，給你的網(wǎng)友Cindy發(fā)一封電子郵件．向她介紹Ann的基本情況．
內(nèi)容提示：
Ann 年齡 15歲
生日 10月8日
外貌 中等身材
性格 開朗的
愛好 收集硬幣，到目前為止已收集有三千多枚
學(xué)習(xí)方法 小組合作
為人處事 與人相處融洽，樂于助人

要求：1、文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名；
2、必須用上所給的內(nèi)容提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
 3、語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
 4、詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Cindy，
How are you recently？Now let me tell you something about my best friend Ann．Ann is a girl of fifteen．She was born on October 8th．She was tall of medium build and she is very outgoing．She likes collecting old coins and she has been collected over three thousand coins so far．She likes studying and she thinks studying with groups is a good way．She gets on well with others and she enjoys helping others．
Could you please introduce your best friend to me？I′m looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是給你的網(wǎng)友Cindy發(fā)一封電子郵件．向她介紹Ann的基本情況，注意郵件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1年齡15歲
2生日10月8日
3外貌 中等身材
4性格 開朗的
5愛好 收集硬幣，到目前為止已收集有三千多枚
6學(xué)習(xí)方法 小組合作
7為人處事 與人相處融洽，樂于助人

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
be born 出生
of medium build 中等身材
like doing sth 喜歡做某事
get on with sb 與某人相處
enjoy doing sth 喜歡做某事
【高分句型】
1．She ①likes collecting old coins and she has been collected over three thousand coins ②so far．
①like doing sth 喜歡做某事
②so far 至今，與現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)連用
2．She likes studying and she thinks①②studying with groups is a good way．
①think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
②動(dòng)名詞短語studying with groups 做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)is．
3．She ①gets on well with others and she ②enjoys helping others．
①get on well with sb 與某人相處的好
②enjoy doing sth 喜歡做某事

解答 Dear Cindy，
How are you recently？Now let me tell you something about my best friend Ann．
Ann is a girl of fifteen．She was born on October 8th．（年齡生日）She was tall of medium build and she is very outgoing．（外貌性格）She likes collecting old coins and she has been collected over three thousand coins so far．【高分句型】（愛好）She likes studying and she thinks studying with groups is a good way．【高分句型】（學(xué)習(xí)方法） She gets on well with others and she enjoys helping others．【高分句型】（為人處事）
Could you please introduce your best friend to me？I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題要求給網(wǎng)友Cindy發(fā)郵件介紹一下好朋友Ann的情況，要介紹她的年齡、生日、外貌、性格、愛好等等．要注意準(zhǔn)確使用描述人的動(dòng)詞及介詞．介紹好友的部分主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱單數(shù)形式．要注意用準(zhǔn)行為動(dòng)詞三人稱單數(shù)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)的構(gòu)成形式．短文層次清楚，條理清晰．郵件開頭問候后直接進(jìn)入主題：現(xiàn)在讓我給你談?wù)勎业暮糜寻�；第二段根�?jù)提示要求介紹好友的年齡、生日、外貌、性格、愛好、學(xué)習(xí)方法、為人處事等等，包含了提示的所有信息，表達(dá)清楚．