Question

8．如今，在同學(xué)們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中經(jīng)常會遇到一些麻煩，有時這讓我們非常煩惱，為此，英語報開辟了以"More Advice，Better Life"為主題的專欄，希望同學(xué)們踴躍提出建議．現(xiàn)請你根據(jù)下面表格提示，寫一篇英語短文，從學(xué)習(xí)和生活兩個方面談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何去做．

	建議
如何學(xué)習(xí)	1．多請教老師，多和同學(xué)交流； 2．制定學(xué)習(xí)計劃，勞逸結(jié)合； …
如何與同學(xué)相處	1．學(xué)會傾聽，尊重對方； 2．樂于助人，相互信任； …

注意：1．詞數(shù)80-100；
2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
3．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾以為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
We students always meet with some problems in our study and lifeAnd sometimes those problems can prevent us from moving forward．Now，here is some advice to solve them．
Firstly，we can ask our teachers for help or communicate with ourclassmates whenever we meet problems in our study．Secondly，we can makereasonable study plans so that we can keep a balance between busy study andrest．As for problems in life，first of all，we should respect and trust eachother all the time．Then，we need learn to receive voices from others．Finally，we should never refuse giving our hands to anyone who is in trouble．
No matter what kind of problems we may meet with，let's face them together with our friends，our teachers and our parents．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何學(xué)習(xí)如何與同學(xué)相處．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1如何學(xué)習(xí)1）．多請教老師，多和同學(xué)交流；2）．制定學(xué)習(xí)計劃，勞逸結(jié)合；
2如何與同學(xué)相處：1）．學(xué)會傾聽，尊重對方；2）．樂于助人，相互信任
常用到的重點短語：
provent sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事
ask sb for help尋求某人的幫忙
keep a banlance保持平衡
first of all 首先
in trouble處于困境
【高分句型】
1．Secondly，we can make reasonable study plans ①so that we can②keep a balance③between busy study and rest．
①so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．
②keep a banlance保持平衡
③between …and …兩者之間
2．Finally，we should never①refuse giving our hands to anyone②who is in trouble．
①refuse doing sth 拒絕做某事
②定語從句，who是關(guān)系詞作為從句的主語，修飾先行詞anyone．in trouble處于困境中

解答 We students always meet with some problems in our study and life．And sometimes those problems can prevent us from moving forward．Now，here is some advice to solve them．
Firstly，we can ask our teachers for help or communicate with our classmates whenever we meet problems in our study．Secondly，we can make reasonable study plans so that we can keep a balance between busy study and rest．【高分句型】（如何學(xué)習(xí)）As for problems in life，first of all，we should respect and trust each other all the time．Then，we need learn to receive voices from others．Finally，we should never refuse giving our hands to anyone who is in trouble【高分句型】．（如何與同學(xué)相處）
No matter what kind of problems we may meet with，let's face them together with our friends，our teachers and our parents．

點評 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出．寫作時先要圍繞這些要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點全部表達(dá)出來，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點時，要結(jié)合活動內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點．