Question

12．A．話題作文：近年來由于過分強(qiáng)調(diào)升學(xué)率，加之家長望子成龍心切，給學(xué)生帶來很大壓力，忽略了孩子們的身體健康．因此國家發(fā)起"開展陽光體育運動"的號召，以引起人們的重視，請以"運動"為話題寫一篇短文．
提示：1．你最喜歡什么運動；
2．你在校內(nèi)外所進(jìn)行的運動及時間； 
3．運動的感受和意義．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old當(dāng)我只有五歲的時候我學(xué)會了游泳．
when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks雖然一開始在水里我有點緊張，但在我的父母和教練的幫助下，幾個星期之后我能游的很好．
although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．不能與but連用．

解答 As we know，sport is an important part of our life．I am interested in sport and I do sports every day．
My favourite sport is swimming．（介紹你最喜歡的運動．）It is a healthy and popular sport．I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old．【高分句型一】Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks【高分句型二】．Now，I am very good at swimming and I go swimming over three times a week．As far as I am concernned，swimming in the water is cool and exciting．During the summer holidays，I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time．（如何進(jìn)行體育運動）
I think doing sports is necessary．【高分句型一】Sports can help us relax and concentrate on our studies better．Sports can make us grow well．Sports can bring us friends．（運動帶給你的益處和意義）

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