Question

書面表達(dá)(10分)

Ⅵ. Writing (本題共10分)

每一個(gè)人,每一個(gè)國(guó)家，都擁有夢(mèng)想�！爸袊�(guó)夢(mèng)”是目前最熱的話題。作為中學(xué)生，你是如何理解中國(guó)夢(mèng)的？你的中國(guó)夢(mèng)是什么呢？為實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢(mèng)想，你將怎么做呢？假設(shè)你叫李紅（Li Hong）, 請(qǐng)以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文。

要求： 1. 條理清楚，有表明自己觀點(diǎn)的句子。

2. 書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫使用正確。

3. 短文中應(yīng)盡量包括提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名。

4. 參考詞匯：China dream，come true , give up，hold on to,

MY DREAM

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Answer 1

Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact, a big dream is made up of many small dreams.

My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up, I must get it over .

I’m sure it’s very important to dream, Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如 As young students, we have many kinds of dreams.I’m sure it’s very important to dream, Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.

等， In fact等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。