Question

書面表達(10分)

Ⅵ. Writing (本題共10分)

每一個人,每一個國家，都擁有夢想。“中國夢”是目前最熱的話題。作為中學生，你是如何理解中國夢的？你的中國夢是什么呢？為實現(xiàn)你的夢想，你將怎么做呢？假設你叫李紅（Li Hong）, 請以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。

要求： 1. 條理清楚，有表明自己觀點的句子。

2. 書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，標點符號和大小寫使用正確。

3. 短文中應盡量包括提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名。

4. 參考詞匯：China dream，come true , give up，hold on to,

MY DREAM

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Answer 1

Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact, a big dream is made up of many small dreams.

My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up, I must get it over .

I’m sure it’s very important to dream, Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如 As young students, we have many kinds of dreams.I’m sure it’s very important to dream, Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.

等， In fact等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。