Question

假設(shè)你叫張強(qiáng)，從報(bào)上看到倫敦招聘2012年奧運(yùn)會(huì)志愿者（a volunteer for the 2012 Olympic）的廣告。請(qǐng)你寫封簡(jiǎn)短的應(yīng)聘信，介紹自己的情況（見下表），表示愿意為奧運(yùn)會(huì)做一些工作，請(qǐng)組委會(huì)考慮并盡早予以答復(fù)。
注意：詞數(shù)80左右。信的開頭已給出。

姓名	張強(qiáng)
年齡	16
學(xué)習(xí)簡(jiǎn)歷	2002年9月以來在育才中學(xué)讀書
愛好	打乒乓球等
特長(zhǎng)	英語口語
獲獎(jiǎng)情況	2003年獲全校繪畫比賽一等獎(jiǎng)
身體狀況	健康
聯(lián)系電話	010--825568

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I read your ad. In the newspaper yesterday.        
                                                            
                                                    
                                                               
                                                    
                                                   
                                                     
                                                     
                                                                       
Yours,
Zhang Qia

Answer 1

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I read your ad. In the newspaper yesterday.I’m writing to tell you I’d like to work as a volunteer for the 2008 Olympic.
My name is Zhang Qiang. I’m 16. I have studied in Yucai Middle School since September,2002. I am proud that I won the first prize in the drawing competition in our school in 2003. I love sports and table tennis is my favourite, I can speak English very well and I am quite healthy.
If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer for the 2008 Olympics. Please call me as soon as possible. My telephone number is 010-8255668. I will try my best to do the job well.
Best wishes.  
Yours,
Zhang Qia

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，所給材料內(nèi)容比較具體，要點(diǎn)突出，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語是第一人稱。寫作時(shí)要注意主謂一致問題，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】
這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，文章組織結(jié)構(gòu)合理，層次鮮明，句式變化多樣。同時(shí)，文章中使用了一些的固定句式和短語，如：I’d like to do sth、I am proud that從句、I am lucky enough to do sth、work as、as soon as possible 、try my best to do sth等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)積累，熟練掌握一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。