Question

8．A Good Friend In My Mind
英國有句諺語：結識新朋友，不忘老朋友，老朋友是金，新朋友是銀（Make new friends，but keep the old； Those are silver，these are gold．）．中國自古亦有"有朋自遠方來，不亦樂乎？"等描繪朋友之間友情的名句．初中的學習生活即將結束了，在這段時間里你一定結識了許多朋友，并產生了深厚的友誼．請你寫一篇文章介紹一位你心目中的好朋友．文章必須包含以下內容：1人物簡介；2給你的幫助；3 你的感受．
要求：1）條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確、邏輯清晰；
2）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；
3）80詞左右．（開頭已給出，不計入總次數(shù)．）
A life without friends is like a life without the sun．Nobody can live alone in the world…．       ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school我被深深的感動因為他堅持教我直到我回到學校．
①because引導的原因狀語從句．
②until引導的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed我真的理解了患難見真情．
①that引導的賓語從句，作為understand的賓語．
②a friend in need is a friend in deed患難見真情，諺語的運用．

解答 A Good Friend In My Mind
A life without friends is like a life without the sun．Nobody can live alone in the world．I deeply believe that everyone has their most important people in their lifetime．For me，that's my classmate，Tom．（人物簡介）I still remember that once my leg was badly hurt in a football match，and I had to stay in bed for two weeks．While I was worried about school work at home，my classmate Tom came to help me．He told me what the teacher taught in class，and helped me a lot with my math problems．I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school．【高分句型一】I was glad that I caught up with my classmates．（給你的幫助）From then on，we became best friends．I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed．【高分句型二】（你的感受）

點評 本文屬于開放性文體，能夠很大程度上調動學生的想象空間，學生可以結合自己的經歷，首先對每個人在他們心中都有一個重要的人物，這個現(xiàn)象進行肯定，接下來結合自己的一次經歷，說明他是如何幫助我的，如何給了最深的印象．最后對自己所經歷的事情的感受進行描寫．