Question

去年秋季始，江蘇省全面實(shí)施教育新政，嚴(yán)格控制學(xué)生在校時(shí)間，轉(zhuǎn)變課堂教學(xué)方式，請(qǐng)你就實(shí)施教育新政前后你校的變化寫一篇英文報(bào)道，同時(shí)發(fā)表你個(gè)人看法。

教育新政前		教育新政后
學(xué)生在校學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，每天超過十個(gè)小時(shí)。		在校學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間減少，每天不到七個(gè)小時(shí)。
課堂上只要認(rèn)真聽老師講授就行了。		課堂上同學(xué)們經(jīng)�；ハ嘤懻摚�有充足的自學(xué)時(shí)間。
學(xué)生身心疲憊，上課經(jīng)常遲到。		學(xué)生興趣高，到校準(zhǔn)時(shí)，學(xué)習(xí)能力明顯增強(qiáng)。
個(gè)人看法	……

注意：1. 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上提供的信息寫報(bào)道，個(gè)人看法可自由發(fā)揮。
2. 表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫。
3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
4. 參考詞匯：實(shí)施conduct, 教育新政 the New Educational Policy。
My school conducted the New Educational Policy last autumn and great changes have taken place since then.
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Answer 1

My school conducted the New Educational Policy last autumn and great changes have taken place since then.
Before the New Educational Policy, we had to study at school for too long, usually for over ten hours every day. In class, we just listened to our teachers carefully. Feeling tired from to time, we used to be late for school.
Now we spend less than seven hours studying at school every day. In class, my classmates and I often have a hot discussion with each other and have enough time to learn on our own. As a result, all of us become so interested in our subjects that we are no longer late for school and our learning abilities are getting stronger and stronger.
I think that the New Educational Policy is meaningful because it has helped us learn better, improve all our abilities and enjoy ourselves at the same time.

試題分析：這是一篇根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)提示寫一篇通過施教育新政改造后學(xué)校學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)生了哪些改變，作者陳述了個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。文中必須用到Before和Now以前和現(xiàn)在的對(duì)照，以第一人稱的形式來(lái)寫闡述了作者的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，使用了listened to our teachers carefully，we spend less than seven hours studying at school every day注意一些固定搭配和詞組，考查了學(xué)生的綜合能力。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章構(gòu)思新穎，內(nèi)容包括面很全，語(yǔ)言組織力很強(qiáng)，切中題意，文中出現(xiàn)了一些好的句型如：enough time to learn on our own.. all of us become so interested in our subjects that we are no longer late for school and our learning abilities are getting stronger and stronger.
使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。