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5月9日，靖江市人民政府新聞辦公室發(fā)布消息：上午10時(shí)左右，市自來水公司發(fā)現(xiàn)長(zhǎng)江水有異味，本著對(duì)市民負(fù)責(zé)的態(tài)度，第一時(shí)間關(guān)閉取水口，暫停供水。并盡快啟動(dòng)應(yīng)急處置預(yù)案。該消息甚至引發(fā)了短暫的超市供水荒，也引發(fā)了大家珍惜水資源的大討論。你們班上周召開了“珍惜水資源”的主題班會(huì)，同學(xué)們就這個(gè)話題展開了熱烈的討論。請(qǐng)你寫一篇文章報(bào)道此次班會(huì)的情況并發(fā)表自己的見解。要點(diǎn)如下：

要求：
所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的所有信息，省略號(hào)處需作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮；
開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；總詞數(shù)不少于100；
不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
Last week, our class had a class meeting on the topic of Cherish Water Resource. All the students took an active part in the discussion and shared their opinions with each other. We think
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What should we do to cherish the water resource?__________________________________
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In a word, water is very important to us. Each of us should do our best to cherish water resource so that people in the future will have plenty of water to use.

Answer 1

Last week, our class had a class meeting on the topic of Cherish Water Resource. All the students took an active part in the discussion and shared their opinions with each other. We think all animals and plants need water to grow and humans can’t live without water.
However, fresh water is becoming less and less. With the development of our society and the increase of population , we need more water. But many people are wasting much water in their daily life. What’s worse, many factories are pouring poisonous water into the rivers, causing great pollution. What should we do to cherish the water resource? We  must stop wasting water from now on,and waste water from factories must be stopped right now. Only by doing so , can we protect our valuable fresh water and live a happy life.
In a word, water is very important to us. Each of us should do our best to cherish water resource so that people in the future will have plenty of water to use.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，要注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】亮點(diǎn)一：fresh water is becoming less and less. 新鮮的水是越來越少。
亮點(diǎn)二：With the development of our society and the increase of population.用介詞結(jié)構(gòu)短語(yǔ)比較新穎。
亮點(diǎn)三： causing great pollution現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)做伴隨狀語(yǔ)。