Question

假如你是李明，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)向校長(zhǎng)寫一篇80個(gè)詞左右的建議信。信中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的班名和姓名。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next, I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

解析試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:be glad to很高興做某事；talk about談?wù)摗�…；thanks for謝謝……等。序數(shù)詞first，second及聯(lián)系as，and等的使用使得本文邏輯清楚，上下文聯(lián)系緊密。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。
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