Question

書面表達（共1題，計15分）

初中階段的學習和生活即將結(jié)束，你的老師陪伴你度過了三年的校園生活�；仡櫰渲械脑S多點點滴滴，久久不能忘記。請你用英文給你的某一位教師寫一封信，和他（她）說說感激的心里話。要點提示：

教師表現(xiàn)	1.工作認真； 2.嚴格要求也關愛學生； ……
留存記憶	1.師生相處和睦； 2.學業(yè)取得了進步; ……

要求：1．內(nèi)容包括所有提示要點，意思完整，語言規(guī)范。

2．可適當發(fā)揮，增加細節(jié)，使語句連貫通暢。

3．文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校。

4．90詞左右，信的首尾寫好．不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear my teacher,

Leaving you-lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.

 

 

 

 

 

Thank you again for what you've done for us! All the best to you!

 

Yours,

×××

 

Answer 1

Dear my teacher,

Leaving you－lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.

I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago. You always work hard . and treat us well. You’re strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well, because your class is very interesting and lively.

During my school life, we can get along well with each other. When I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave.

Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too.

Thank you again for what you've done for us! All the best to you!

Yours,

XXX

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。運用適當?shù)亩陶Z表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。