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以Great changes in my Hometown 為題，按下列提示要求寫一篇80詞左右短文，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化。

過去	生活貧困，房屋破舊陰暗；污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。道路窄 游客很少。
現(xiàn)在	住房寬敞，明亮；現(xiàn)代學(xué)校，許多人有小車，孩子可接受教育，空氣更新鮮；交通方便：游客每年有幾萬(wàn)。我的感受是希望記住過去，展望未來是很重要的。

注意：1文中不得出現(xiàn)具體地名，開頭已給出，不幾入總數(shù)。
2 詞匯：traffic 交通； convenient 方便的；pollution 污染; rubbish 垃圾；
The changes in My hometown                                            
    In the past ，my hometown was very small.                                                    
                                                                         
                                                                         

Answer 1

The Changes in My Hometown
In the past ,my hometown was very small, people lived a poor life ,The houses were old and dark .pollution was very serious ，and there was rubbish everywhere .the roads were narrow and traffic was not convenient , so few visitors came here .
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown .people are living in many tall buildings ,.what’s more, There are many modern schools and children can get a good education .there are trees ,flowers ,and grass everywhere ,people can see greener   mountains, cleaner rivers and bluer sky ,and their houses are larger and brighter . Many people have their own cars .every year thousands of people tourists come to my hometown for a visit.
I’m sure my hometown will become better and better ,I think It is important to remember the past and dream about the future.

試題分析：本題要求寫一篇關(guān)于介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)變化的短文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)。寫作中注意將家鄉(xiāng)過去和現(xiàn)在的一些情況介紹清楚，并描述自己對(duì)將來的展望。結(jié)合材料可知本文時(shí)態(tài)人稱問題比較復(fù)雜，涉及過去，現(xiàn)在和將來三種時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配問題及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: take place發(fā)生；what’s more而且；thousands of成千上萬(wàn)的；it is……to do sth做某事很重要等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。