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12．本周班會課，你班舉行了"讀好書，促成長"的主題班會．會上同學(xué)們積極發(fā)言，請根據(jù)發(fā)言內(nèi)容寫一份80詞以上的倡議書，倡議全班同學(xué)認真讀書，豐富自己的課余生活．給出的開頭不計入詞數(shù)．

讀書的重要性	讀書可以獲取知識，增長見識，使人聰明，使人快樂，有助于學(xué)習(xí)，有助于成長．
班級讀書情況	許多同學(xué)在上網(wǎng)、看電視、聽音樂上花費很多時間，讀書時間太少．
發(fā)出倡議	多讀書，讀好書．

參考詞匯：獲取知識gain knowledge；增長見識open the mind
My dear friends，
Reading plays an important part in our daily life．We can gain knowledge through reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier．Our study can be improved if we read more books．Reading also helps us grow as a person．
However，it's a great pity that many activities such as surfing the Internet，listening to music，and watching TV and so on take up too much of our reading time．So here，I would like to suggest that everyone should spend more time in reading books and reading good books．It will do good to us．Let's start reading now．．

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分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是倡議全班同學(xué)認真讀書，豐富自己的課余生活．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．讀書的重要性；讀書可以獲取知識，增長見識，使人聰明，使人快樂，有助于學(xué)習(xí)，有助于成長．
2．班級讀書情況；許多同學(xué)在上網(wǎng)、看電視、聽音樂上花費很多時間，讀書時間太少．
3．發(fā)出倡議；多讀書，讀好書．
常用到的重點短語：
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
take up  占用
spend+時間+in doing sth 花時間做某事
do good to  對…有益
【高分句型】
1．It can ①not only open our minds but also ②make us cleverer and happier．
①not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個對等的成分．
②make sb+adj 讓某人怎么樣的
2．Our study①can be improved②if we read more books．
①情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)--情態(tài)動詞+be+過去分詞
②if所引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動詞can，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時代替一般將來時．
3．However，①it's a great pity that many activities ②such as surfing the Internet，listening to music，and watching TV and so on③take up too much of our reading time
①it作為形式主語，that從句做真正主語．
②such as 例如，and so on 等等
③take up  占用

解答 My dear friends，
Reading plays an important part in our daily life．We can gain knowledge through reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier．【高分句型】Our study can be improved if we read more books．【高分句型】Reading also helps us grow as a person．（讀書的重要性）
However，it's a great pity that many activities such as surfing the Internet，listening to music，and watching TV and so on take up too much of our reading time．（班級讀書情況）【高分句型】So here，I would like to suggest that everyone should spend more time in reading books and reading good books．It will do good to us．Let's start reading now．（發(fā)出倡議）

點評 這是一篇給定材料作文，要求圍繞"讀好書，促成長"的主題寫一份倡議書，倡議全班同學(xué)認真讀書，豐富自己的課余生活．．本題給出了具體要點：讀書的重要些，班級讀書情況，發(fā)出倡議．在動筆寫作．選取材料時，注意選擇自己熟悉的內(nèi)容．在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性．結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱以第一人稱為主，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題．寫作中適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．在寫書面表達是首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應(yīng)注意英語的動詞，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句．