Question

15．使用所給的詞語，編寫一個意義相對完整的語段．
提示詞：dream，musician，practice，early，with
要求：1．使用全部提示詞，并在語段中用下劃波浪線"﹏﹏﹏"標出提示詞；
2．語段具有一個相對合理的主題意義；
3．詞數(shù)為100詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I'm going to be a musician player like Lang Lang when I grow up當我長大了我將要成為一名像郎朗一樣的音樂家．
when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句
【高分句型二】
To make my dream come true．I get up early to practice playing the piano every day為了實現(xiàn)夢想，我每天早起練習(xí)彈鋼琴．
To make my dream come true，to practice playing the piano 動詞不定式做目的狀語．

解答 My dream
Everyone has dreams．I have a dream，too．I'm going to be a musician player like Lang Lang when I grow up．【高分句型一】（夢想是什么）
I started to play the piano at the age of four．At first，I didn't like the piano at all and I wanted to give up．But my parents often encouraged me，"Never give up，son!You can do it!"With the help of the piano teacher and my parents，I began to make great progress in playing the piano and love it very much．Now I can play the piano pretty well and my parents and the piano teacher are very pleased with me．（為什么）To make my dream come true．I get up early to practice playing the piano every day．【高分句型二】I believe I can do it．（怎樣實現(xiàn)）
What's your dream？Can you tell me？

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