Question

書面表達(dá)（15 分）

假如你是趙輝， 就個(gè)人愛好帶來的困惑給英國朋友Jack發(fā)電子郵件進(jìn)行交流并請(qǐng)求幫助。

要點(diǎn)：

趙輝	愛好	對(duì)集郵感興趣，經(jīng)常和朋友交流
困惑	得不到老師的理解
觀點(diǎn)	個(gè)人愛好有助于學(xué)習(xí) ……
老師	觀點(diǎn)	時(shí)間應(yīng)花在功課上，成績就是一切

注意 : 1.詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右（已給內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

2.內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字逐句翻譯;

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名，校名和人名。

Dear Jack,

I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.

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What shall I do ? Can you offer me some suggestions ?I am looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes.

Zhao Hui

 

Answer 1

Dear Jack,

I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.

You know I am crazy about collecting stamps. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him , good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.

I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby , it will be of great value to my future development. But I don’t think my teacher understands me. I feel bad about that.

What shall I do ? Can you offer me some suggestions ?I am looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes.

Zhao Hui

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用表格的給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)：要求介紹自己的愛好，及困惑，并闡述自己的愛好的觀點(diǎn)，及老師的觀點(diǎn)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱和第三人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

這篇短文思路清晰，邏輯性強(qiáng)。首先表達(dá)自己的愛好，然后描述老師的觀點(diǎn)看法，表達(dá)自己的困惑。之后闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)求幫助。適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，流暢的語言，為文章增色不少.

考點(diǎn)：表格作文