Question

某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。

過(guò)去	生活貧困，房屋破舊。 污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。
現(xiàn)在	生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人有自己的汽車； 環(huán)境變得更漂亮了。 旅游：每年有成千上萬(wàn)來(lái)自各地的游客。
將來(lái)	希望……（兩點(diǎn)）

The Changes in My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small,

 

Answer 1

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old. Pollution was very serious. There was rubbish everywhere.

Now, great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. People live a better life. Their houses are large ad bright. Many people have owned cars. Every year, thousands of tourists from all over the world come to visit our city.

I hope we can how wider roads and more sports courts .I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，可按照時(shí)間順序來(lái)寫，注意要點(diǎn)的齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】

這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有許多實(shí)用的表達(dá)方式Now, great changes have taken place in my hometown.現(xiàn)在，家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了巨大的改變。Take place發(fā)生； more and more beautiful越來(lái)越漂亮； thousands of成千上萬(wàn)； all over the world世界各地；better and better越來(lái)越好；in the future 在將來(lái)；等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。