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17．我國(guó)是一個(gè)發(fā)展中國(guó)家，我們應(yīng)該勤儉節(jié)約，使中國(guó)成為一個(gè)節(jié)約型的社會(huì)．我們中學(xué)生應(yīng)該從身邊的點(diǎn)滴做起，節(jié)約能源． 你是如何做的？請(qǐng)你就這一個(gè)話題寫(xiě)一篇80字的短文．要點(diǎn)要求：
1．騎自行車到校，不乘公交車和出租車．
2．離開(kāi)教室，記著關(guān)燈，不用水時(shí)，請(qǐng)關(guān)水龍頭．
3．有空時(shí)，收集空瓶子和廢紙．
4．節(jié)約錢，不花太多的錢在昂貴的東西上．
5．不砍樹(shù)，保護(hù)環(huán)境，節(jié)約能源．
參考詞匯：water tap，cut down，energy．

Answer 1

分析 ①First，it's best to ride a bike to school，don't take a bus or a taxi．首先，最好騎自行車上學(xué)，不要坐公共汽車或出租車．句子考查It's best to do sth最好做某事，是個(gè)固定句型，take a bus/taxi乘公共汽車/出租車．
②Also，I won't spend too much money on expensive things．此外，我不會(huì)花太多的錢買昂貴的東西．句子考查spend money on sth表示花費(fèi)錢買某物．

解答 China is a developing country．How to save environment？（引出話題）I think we should do the followings：First，it's best to ride a bike to school，don't take a bus or a taxi．Second（高分句型），I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom．Turn off the water tap when I‘m not using it．Third，in my free time，I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling．Fourth，it is important to save water and money．Also，I won't spend too much money on expensive things（高分句型）．Last，we had better not cut down the trees，we have to take care of the trees．（為保護(hù)環(huán)境所采取的措施）I'll try my best to save the energy，I hope I can do something for our country．（我的希望）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯．在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，使文章自然流暢．同時(shí)，使用了一些常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，如：it's best to do sth、it is important to  do sth、remember to do sth、turn off、in my free time、spend---on、had better、take care of、try one's best to do sth以及序數(shù)詞first、second等，這為文章增色不少．在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．