Question

8．假如你是Zhang Li，在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中遇到了以下問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)你給英語(yǔ)報(bào)社編輯Mr．Friend發(fā)一封電子郵件，向他咨詢(xún)并希望得到他的幫助．

My problems

1．對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)不感興趣； 2．記憶單詞有困難； 3．怕出錯(cuò)，不敢參與小組討論； 4．閱讀中不知如何處理生詞； 5．寫(xiě)作中…（至少自擬兩點(diǎn)）

要求：1．所寫(xiě)短文必須包含以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．層次清晰，語(yǔ)意連貫，中心突出，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3．詞數(shù)不少于90詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Friend，
I'm very pleased to write to you．      ．
Yours sincerely，
Zhang Li．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I am not very interested in English and I have difficulties remembering new words．
句中使用短語(yǔ)有"be interested in sth 對(duì)…感興趣"、"have difficulty doing sth  做某事有困難"．這句話意為：我對(duì)英語(yǔ)不感興趣，而且記新單詞有困難．
高分句型二：
I spend a lot of time trying to learn the new words by heart，but I always forget a lot．
句中使用短語(yǔ)有：spend+時(shí)間+doing sth 做某事花費(fèi)多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間；try to do sth 盡力做某事．這句話意為：我很用心地花了大量時(shí)間在學(xué)習(xí)新單詞上，但是我總是忘記．

解答 Dear Mr．Friend，
I'm very pleased to write to you．I am not getting along well with my English．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）I am not very interested in English and I have difficulties remembering new words．【高分句型一】I am afraid of making mistakes and I am afraid to discuss in groups．Besides，I don't know how to deal with the new words in reading．I spend a lot of time trying to learn the new words by heart，but I always forget a lot．【高分句型二】And I find grammar is too difficult for me．I can't make complete sentences and I often make mistakes in grammar．（學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的困難）What should I do？Please give me some advice．（尋求幫助）
Yours sincerely，
Zhang Li

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語(yǔ)言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語(yǔ)意通暢．