Question

今天是星期日,是陰雨天,全家人都不能出門(mén),但是大家在家里都過(guò)得很開(kāi)心.于是你寫(xiě)一篇短文記下了正在發(fā)生的一切:爸爸正在和爺爺下象棋;奶奶正在看報(bào)紙;媽媽正在跟電視學(xué)習(xí)做菜;弟弟正在玩他心愛(ài)的玩具.字?jǐn)?shù)60-70左右.

Answer 1

One possible version：
It is Sunday. It is a rainy day, so the whole family can not go out. But we are all having a good time at home.My father is playing chess with my grandpa. My grandma is reading a newspaper. My mom is learning how to cook with TV. My brother is having fun playing with his favorite toy. I am doing my homework in my room. We are very happy.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我和我的家人星期天正在做的事情。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is ......；My father is.....；My grandma is .....及I am......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了星期天的天氣，接下來(lái)介紹我們一家人正在做的事情，最后指出我們都很高興。此處用了go out， having a good time， playing chess with，playing with及doing my homework等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。