Question

8．你的朋友Peter即將面臨中考，然而他卻深感壓力巨大，寢食不安，情緒低落，學(xué)習(xí)效率低下，請你寫一封信給他提一些有益的建議，幫助他調(diào)整心態(tài)，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，輕松應(yīng)考．要點(diǎn)如下：
1學(xué)會放松（體育鍛煉，聽音樂…）
2 健康飲食
3 充足睡眠
4 學(xué)會溝通
注意：1 詞數(shù)80詞左右．（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．）
2 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但必須包含以上要點(diǎn)．
Dear Peter，
Don't worry about your study too much．First，you should
                                                     
I hope you can stay in good spirits and study better．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型分析：
高分句型一：
①Listening to music is also a good way ②to relax．聽音樂也是一種放松的好方法．
①動名詞作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)；
②動詞不定式to relx作后置定語修飾a good way，意為：一種放松的好方法
高分句型二：
And I think it's necessary to have healthy eating habits．我認(rèn)為擁有健康的飲食習(xí)慣是必要的．
此句I think 后為賓語此句；從句運(yùn)用了固定句式It+be+形容詞+to do sth，意為：做某事是…的，it為形式主語，后面的動詞不定式為真正的主語．

解答 Dear Peter，
      Don't worry about your study too much．First，you should learn how to relax yourself．I think doing more sports is good for your health．Listening to music is also a good way to relax．【高分句型】【學(xué)會放松】And I think it's necessary to have healthy eating habits．【高分句型】Please remember to have breakfast every morning．It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning．【健康飲食】You'd better go to bed early and have enough sleep．It will keep you active during the day．【充足睡眠】Finally I think you should talk with your friends，parents or teachers often．Tell them about your thoughts and feelings．Try to get help from them．【學(xué)會溝通】I hope you can stay in good spirits，and study better．
Yours
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評 此題為應(yīng)用文寫作．首先要仔細(xì)審題，嚴(yán)格按照要求去寫作．其次要注意信的格式，并注意與漢語信的不同；再次行文中要語句通順，注意上下句的銜接，用英語式的思維去組織每個(gè)句子，避免受漢語的影響．采用不同的句式，盡量避免重復(fù)．注意不要出現(xiàn)單詞，語法和時(shí)態(tài)等的錯(cuò)誤．這樣的文章就是好文章．