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11．在英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開(kāi)了討論．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談自己的想法．

團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游	有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路．不必自己找旅館．結(jié)識(shí)朋友，相互幫助．
個(gè)人旅游	自由安排時(shí)間．選擇自己喜歡的景點(diǎn)．學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己．

要求：1）文章包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．想法至少在兩句以上．
2）70字左右，首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3）參考詞匯：團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游：travel with a group個(gè)人旅游：travel alone安排：arrange
Recently，we have discussed the ways to go traveling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help，they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves．Besides，they can make friends and help each other while traveling．However，other students prefer to travel alone．That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights．What's more，it's a chance for them to le arn to look after themselves．
For me，I'd like to travel alone，I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like．In this way，I can enjoy my vacation better．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是匯報(bào)關(guān)于自己喜歡的旅游方式的討論結(jié)果，并且談?wù)勛约旱南敕ǎ畷r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一、三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游：有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路．不必自己找旅館．結(jié)識(shí)朋友，相互幫助．
2個(gè)人旅游：自由安排時(shí)間．選擇自己喜歡的景點(diǎn)．學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己．
3．自己的看法
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
with one's help在某人的幫助下
get lost 迷路
look for 尋找
make friends交朋友
what's more 再者
look after照顧
spend+時(shí)間+doing sth 花時(shí)間做某事

【高分句型】
1．①Besides，they can②make friends and help each other③while traveling．
①besides另外
②make friends交朋友
③while traveling省略句，完整表達(dá)while I am traveling．
2．For me，①I(mǎi)'d like to travel alone，I want to ②spend enough time visiting the places③I like．
①would like to do sth想要做某事
②spend+時(shí)間+doing sth 花時(shí)間做某事
③I like是定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞places，關(guān)系詞which做賓語(yǔ)省略．

解答 Recently，we have discussed the ways to go traveling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help，they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves．Besides，they can make friends and help each other while traveling．（團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游）【高分句型】However，other students prefer to travel alone．That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights．What's more，it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．（個(gè)人旅游）   For me，I'd like to travel alone，I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like．【高分句型】In this way，I can enjoy my vacation better．（自己的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題．寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．