Question

童年是難忘的，有快樂(lè)、有悲傷。請(qǐng)你以“Childhood Memories”為題，寫一篇短文，和大家一起分享你童年中的喜怒哀樂(lè)吧！詞數(shù)：80左右
溫馨提示：childhood n. 童年
Childhood Memories
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Answer 1

I remember my childhood just like yesterday. There was a river around our village. When summer came, I often swam there with my friends. We played with water, and sometimes caught fishes. When we felt tired, we had fun looking for something to eat in the field nearby. Once we were found to pick tomatoes, the farmer shouted to us while we ran away as fast as possible. At that time, I had nothing to worry about. But now, everything has changed!
Goodbye, my childhood! How I wish I could meet you again!)

解析試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。由于是介紹自己的童年，故人稱主要是第一人稱。
考點(diǎn)：命題作文的寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。