Question

上個星期天晚上，你和家人一起去看京劇。談談去之前你的心情及看過之后的體會。詞數60個左右。
提示詞語：look forward to ... , national opera, express Chinese culture, famous stories, facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting, have a nice evening ...
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Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera ...
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Answer 1

Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera. I was looking forward to seeing it, because I heard it was our national opera with a history of 200 years. It expresses Chinese culture. It’s full of famous stories, beautiful facial painting, wonderful gesture and fighting. On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well. When we got to the theater, I found there were so many people there. They looked very excited, too. Then I had a nice evening there. After seeing it, I think it is really wonderful.

試題分析：這是篇命題作文，題目中已經明確了作文的內容，審題時一定要注意文章所要用到的時態(tài)，要用一般過去時。盡量使用到給出的提示詞語，注意詞語和句型的準確使用，表達要通暢流利。句子之間可適當使用連詞，使文章更緊湊。
【亮點分析】本文要點齊全，表達準確流利，句中有很多有用的表達方式和句型，例如：I was looking forward to seeing it,我很期待去看。Look forward to doing sth.期待做某事；On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well.在去看的前一天晚上，我太興奮了都沒有睡好。句型So…that…如此……以至于……。