Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

第45屆世界體操錦標(biāo)賽即將在南寧舉行，現(xiàn)在正在招募志愿者。假設(shè)你有意當(dāng)志愿者，請把你的簡歷寫出來，內(nèi)容包括：外貌、性格；經(jīng)歷；夢想......。

寫作要求：1. 詞數(shù)70詞左右；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)校名、班別、姓名，否則得0分。

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Answer 1

【答案】

I want to be a volunteer of the 45th World Gymnastics Championships. I am happy that the 45th World Gymnastics Championships will be held in Nanning. I want to be a volunteer very much.

I am a warm-hearted and polite boy. I am tall and outgoing. I like to help others. On the bus, I usually give my seat to the people in need. I like making friends. I am good at English and I can speak English very well. Last year, I studied as an exchange student in England. I have been a host of English Evening for many times in our school. My teachers and schoolmates think I am a good host. If I am chosen a volunteer, I will try to help the friends from all over the world learn more about Nanning.

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開放性短文寫作。本文只是給出部分的文字提示，考生可以用身邊某個(gè)人的具體的信息填入文字所要求的內(nèi)容，需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文要點(diǎn)明確，語言精練。層次分明。要點(diǎn)全面。語言的表述符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，時(shí)態(tài)的選擇非常準(zhǔn)確，并注意到主謂一致。最后一句If I am chosen a volunteer, I will try to help the friends from all over the world learn more about Nanning. 寫出了如果自己能成為一名志愿者，做出的承諾，很有說服力。