Question

8．生活中有許多一瞬間的美好，它們也許會(huì)給你留下永遠(yuǎn)的回憶，你身邊的每個(gè)人對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)都具有特殊的意義．請(qǐng)以"My special_______"為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述你家庭的某個(gè)成員或你的朋友、老師、同學(xué)等，以及你們共同經(jīng)歷的某個(gè)美好回憶．
要求：條理清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確，字跡工整，80詞左右．
My special friend
I have a special friend．Her English name is Amy．And I want to thank her for what she has done for me．
When I was in Grade 7，we studied in the same class．At first，I was not good at English．Because of that，I was very sad．Amy did well in English at that time．So she often helped me with my English in our spare time．With her help，my English improved so much that I kept up with my class finally．I wasso glad that I could not only speak English to my classmates and teacher fluently but also understand everything they said!
This is my special friend，Amy，someone who would not only have fun with me but also help me when I need it．I am glad to have this special friend．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型】
1．I was ①so glad that I could ②not only speak English to my classmates and teacher fluently but also understand everything ③they said!我是如此的開(kāi)心，我不僅僅能流利的和同學(xué)說(shuō)英語(yǔ)也能理解他們所說(shuō)的．
①so…that表示如此…以致于，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等成分．
③they said定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系詞that作為從句賓語(yǔ)故省略，修飾先行詞everything．

2．This is my special friend，①Amy，someone ②who would ③not only have fun with me but also help me ④when I need it．這是我的特別的朋友，不僅僅和我玩的開(kāi)心在我需要的時(shí)候還幫助我
①Amy，作為my special friend同位語(yǔ)．
②定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞someone不定代詞，故用who作為關(guān)系詞作主語(yǔ)．
③not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等成分．
④when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 My special friend
I have a special friend．Her English name is Amy．（她是誰(shuí)）And I want to thank her for what she has done for me．
When I was in Grade 7，we studied in the same class．At first，I was not good at English．Because of that，I was very sad．（我怎么了）Amy did well in English at that time．So she often helped me with my English in our spare time．With her help，my English improved so much that I kept up with my class finally．I was so glad that I could not only speak English to my classmates and teacher fluently but also understand everything they said!【高分句型】
This is my special friend，Amy，someone who would not only have fun with me but also help me when I need it．【高分句型】（為什么特別）I am glad to have this special friend．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 初中英語(yǔ)的作文，著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱(chēng)與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在對(duì)所出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題或是采取的措施描寫(xiě)中注意使用連詞或是好的句式．對(duì)于中學(xué)作文的寫(xiě)作，盡量將所學(xué)的知識(shí)運(yùn)用到作文中，寫(xiě)出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，考試時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．