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10．請仔細閱讀下面這篇短文，再根據(jù)短文后面的內(nèi)容要點完成寫作，將短文寫在答題卡指定的位置上． 
This is my favorite school．It starts at 9 a．m．a(chǎn)nd finishes at 3 p．m．We have music and art lessons every day because they are very interesting to us．There are only 25 students in each class．We only have half an hour of homework on weekdays．
There is a park，a shopping mall，a tennis court and a swimming pool．We have a big library with lots of useful books．There are lots of clubs and after-school activities．Every month，we go on a school trip to a museum or a theater．
為了使同學們更加健康快樂地成長，學校決定向同學們征求建議．假如你是劉波，請根據(jù)下面表格提示，以"Suggestions for a Better School Life"為題，用英語向校長寫一封80詞左右的建議信．注意：①文中應包含所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；②語句連貫，不得照搬原文；③不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和姓名；④開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Our school	*open the library more often*organize more after-class activities *give us more time for sports*organize fewer tests
Our teacher	*make classes more interesting*talk less but more clearly in class *finish classes on time*give us less homework

Suggestions for a Better School Life
Dear Headmaster，
I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will_________________________
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                     Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                            Liu Bo．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．
句中"they can talk less but more clearly in class"為"if"引導的條件狀語從句，句中短語有"be interested in sth 對…感興趣"．這句話意為：如果他們可以在課堂上說得更簡單明了，我們會對學習更感興趣而且有更多的時間練習．
高分句型二：
What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
句中"they will give us less homework and finish classes on time"為賓語從句．句中有短語"what's more  再者，而且"、"on time 準時"．這句話意為：再者，我希望他們少留點兒作業(yè)，按時下課．

解答 Dear headmaster，
  I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．（開篇點題）
  First，I hope our school will open the library more often．Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．（對學校的建議）
  As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．【高分句型一】What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．【高分句型二】（對老師的建議）
  Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                             liu Bo

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．