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隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展,手機(jī)在我們?nèi)粘I钪械氖褂萌找鎻V泛。而在學(xué)校中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該擁有手機(jī),有些學(xué)生老師擁有不同的觀點(diǎn)。你們學(xué)校的English Newsletter正在就此舉行征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇征文。

 

 

觀點(diǎn)

理由

一些學(xué)生

贊成擁有

方便與家長(zhǎng)聯(lián)系;

一些老師

反對(duì)擁有

有學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲;

有學(xué)生用手機(jī)考試作弊;

你的觀 點(diǎn)

1 …

2. …

 

要 求:1)表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)法正確,上下文連貫;

2)必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

3)詞數(shù):100詞左右(征文的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));

4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。

With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some students and teachers have different ideas about if the students should own their mobile phones at school.

 

 

 

 

With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some students and teachers have different ideas about if the students should own their mobile phones at school.

Some students think that they may have their own mobile phones. If so, they can contact their parents when necessary. On the other hand, they can read news with it. Besides that, they can easily search for information they need.

However, some teachers are against it. They think that students not only play games but also send answers to each other in exams with mobile phones. What’s worse, students spend too much time on them at night so that they are sleepy in class in the day time.

In my opinion, students needn’t own mobile phones. We must focus on our study. Even if we need call somebody, we can ask our teachers for help.

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略,動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言,列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱,確定句子的時(shí)態(tài),句式,關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第三人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。為了使表達(dá)更有邏輯性,可以使用序數(shù)詞,連接詞等。此類作文首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí),不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠,就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了一些固定句型短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少。如On the other hand,另一方面;What’s worse更糟糕的是;In my opinion在我看來(lái);They think that students not only play games but also send answers to each other in exams with mobile phones. 他們認(rèn)為,學(xué)生不僅玩游戲也將用手機(jī)在考試時(shí)互相傳遞答案。students spend too much time on them at night so that they are sleepy in class in the day time. 學(xué)生花太多時(shí)間在晚上,他們經(jīng)常在白天的課堂上睡覺。等等。

考點(diǎn):提綱作文。

 

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