Question

寫作 (計10分)

隨著經濟的發(fā)展，手機在我們日常生活中的使用日益廣泛。而在學校中學生是否應該擁有手機，有些學生和老師擁有不同的觀點。你們學校的English Newsletter正在就此舉行征文活動，請根據下列表格提示的內容，用英語寫一篇征文。

 

	觀點	理由
一些學生	贊成擁有	方便與家長聯系； …
一些老師	反對擁有	有學生用手機玩游戲； 有學生用手機考試作弊； …
你的觀 點	…	1 … 2. …

 

要 求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2）必須包括表格中所有的相關信息，并適當發(fā)揮；

3）詞數：100詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；

4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。

With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some students and teachers have different ideas about if the students should own their mobile phones at school.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some students and teachers have different ideas about if the students should own their mobile phones at school.

Some students think that they may have their own mobile phones. If so, they can contact their parents when necessary. On the other hand, they can read news with it. Besides that, they can easily search for information they need.

However, some teachers are against it. They think that students not only play games but also send answers to each other in exams with mobile phones. What’s worse, students spend too much time on them at night so that they are sleepy in class in the day time.

In my opinion, students needn’t own mobile phones. We must focus on our study. Even if we need call somebody, we can ask our teachers for help.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，句式，關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，可適當發(fā)揮。結合材料可知本文主要是第三人稱，時態(tài)主要用一般現在時。為了使表達更有邏輯性，可以使用序數詞，連接詞等。此類作文首先要做的就是認真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分數。

【亮點說明】文中使用了一些固定句型短語，為文章增色不少。如On the other hand,另一方面；What’s worse更糟糕的是；In my opinion在我看來；They think that students not only play games but also send answers to each other in exams with mobile phones. 他們認為，學生不僅玩游戲也將用手機在考試時互相傳遞答案。students spend too much time on them at night so that they are sleepy in class in the day time. 學生花太多時間在晚上，他們經常在白天的課堂上睡覺。等等。

考點：提綱作文。