Question

請(qǐng)你給班主任寫(xiě)一封推薦信，推薦 Li Lei 當(dāng)班長(zhǎng)。信中要對(duì)Li Lei進(jìn)行全面介紹。

詞數(shù)80-100。

1.16歲，九年級(jí)，外貌。

2.星座----，以及所代表的性格特征。

3.有許多個(gè)人特質(zhì)：自信、勤奮、好學(xué)，成績(jī)好。

4.樂(lè)于助人，常為我們講解難題。

5.為人善良，不自私，能注意每個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)。

6.聰明、富于創(chuàng)意和想象力。

18th August

Dear Mr. Lu

We are writing to recommend Li Lei as our monitor.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Lu

W e are writing to recommend Li Lei as our monitor. He is a 16-year-old good-looking boy .He is in Grade 9.His star sign is Leo, so he is so confident and hardworking that he often gets good marks in all the subjects .He is polite and helpful to others. When his classmates have any problems, they often ask him for help. He is kind, generous, so he has made many good friends. He is very clever, creative and imaginative. He often takes an active part in different activities. We all like him.

I think that Li Lei has all the qualities to be a good monitor .I hope you can agree with me.

Yours Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)是一封推薦信，首先應(yīng)該注意書(shū)信的格式，然后注意推薦的是別人，所以人稱應(yīng)該用第三人稱；本文的時(shí)態(tài)也應(yīng)該盡可能用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意表達(dá)的邏輯性，盡量將提示內(nèi)容表達(dá)的直觀清晰，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。本文中會(huì)用到這些單詞或短語(yǔ)confident、hardworking、careful、kind、clever、creative、imaginative、help sb. to do等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這封信注意到了格式，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組搭配，還注意了連詞的運(yùn)用。句子的順暢，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文