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現(xiàn)在環(huán)境變得越來越差。環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作，學習，生活。而我們的工作，生活，生產(chǎn)又使環(huán)境污染越來越嚴重…如何保護我們的環(huán)境？請以“How to protect/save our environment/world?”為題寫一篇短文。

提示：存在問題：

1．水污染和大氣污染越來越嚴重

2．森林被破壞和砍伐

3．白色垃圾隨處可見

要求：如何改善/保護環(huán)境？至少3－4個方面，80詞左右。

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　　答案：One possible version．

How to protect/save our environment/world？

　　The environmental pollution is more and more serious today．We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down, some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution．Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life, it’s time for us to protect our world．

　　Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as possible．Don’t use plastic bags．Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．

　　評分標準：

　　1、內(nèi)容充實，包含全部要點。表達清楚，語言基本無誤。(13－15分)

　　2、要點全部寫出，較通順完整，有少量語法、拼寫錯誤。(10－12分)

　　3、基本要點寫出，有較多語法、拼寫錯誤，但尚能達意。(7－9分)

　　4、要點不全，篇幅不足，表達不清楚，錯誤較多。(4－6分)

　　5、能寫出一兩個要點，表達不清楚，只拼湊詞句。(0－3分)