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3．進(jìn)入九年級(jí)后你在生活和學(xué)習(xí)方面遇到了哪些困難？你是如何處理這些問(wèn)題的？你今后準(zhǔn)備怎么辦？
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求及表格提示寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文談?wù)勥@些方面．
具體要求：1．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順；
2．短文必須包括以下要點(diǎn)提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
4．開(kāi)頭已給，不記入詞數(shù)．

問(wèn)題	過(guò)去	有很多空閑的時(shí)間 作業(yè)很少 …
	現(xiàn)在	很忙 不被允許做… …
解決方法	向…請(qǐng)求幫助 通過(guò)…學(xué)習(xí)
計(jì)劃	打算…

提示詞：used to，free time，not be allowed to，ask…for help
My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine．I used to have a lot of free time before．I had time to do things that I liked to do，such as playing football with my friends，going to the movie and so on．And I had little homework to do．So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class．But all these have changed．
Now I am so busy that I rarely have time to do other things except doing homework．In order to study well，I am not allowed to go to the movie，or to read novels．
I think I need to turn to my teachers for help．They can give me some useful advice．In the future，I think I should plan my time properly．I must balance the study and my hobbies．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是進(jìn)入九年級(jí)后你在生活和學(xué)習(xí)方面遇到了哪些困難？你是如何處理這些問(wèn)題的？你今后準(zhǔn)備怎么辦？時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．問(wèn)題；1）過(guò)去：有很多空閑的時(shí)間，作業(yè)很少2）現(xiàn)在：很忙，不被允許做…
2． 解決方法；向…請(qǐng)求幫助；通過(guò)…學(xué)習(xí)
3．計(jì)劃
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
uesd to do sth過(guò)去常常
in order to 為了…
be allowed to do sth 被允許做某事
turn to 轉(zhuǎn)向
learn to do sth 學(xué)會(huì)做某事
【高分句型】
1．I had time to do things①that I liked to do，②such as playing football with my friends，going to the movie and so on．
①that是關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞things，thay作為從句的賓語(yǔ)．
②such as 例如，and so on  等等
2．So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class．
which作為關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞books，介詞from是與learn構(gòu)成learn from…從…學(xué)到，將介詞from提到關(guān)系詞which前面，which 作為賓語(yǔ)．此時(shí)which不能換成that．
3．Now I am ①so busy that I rarely have time to do other things ②except doing homework．
①so…that，如此…以至于．that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
②except 介詞，除…之外

解答 My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine． I used to have a lot of free time before．I had time to do things that I liked to do，such as playing football with my friends，going to the movie and so on．【高分句型】And I had little homework to do．（有很多空閑的時(shí)間，作業(yè)很少）So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class．【高分句型】But all these have changed．
Now I am so busy that I rarely have time to do other things except doing homework．【高分句型】In order to study well，I am not allowed to go to the movie，or to read novels．（很忙，不被允許做）
I think I need to turn to my teachers for help．（找老師幫忙）They can give me some useful advice．I think I should learn to plan my time properly．（學(xué)會(huì)計(jì)劃好時(shí)間）In the future，I must balance the study and my hobbies．（計(jì)劃）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．材料中已經(jīng)明確了寫(xiě)作的要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要仔細(xì)審題，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)．另外，句子的表達(dá)要清晰準(zhǔn)確，句子間的邏輯要清楚．這篇作文中會(huì)涉及到不同的時(shí)間，所以一定要注意時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化．整篇文章要做到結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)明確，表達(dá)通順流暢．本文中使用了很多好的短語(yǔ)和復(fù)雜的句式．