Question

18．你的朋友莉莉將要面臨中考，感到壓力巨大，吃不好睡不好，情緒低落，學校效率低下，請你寫一封信，給她一些有益的建議，幫助她調整心態(tài)，輕松應考．100詞左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．
要點如下：1學會放松（體育鍛煉，聽音樂…）
2 健康飲食 （ 習慣，每天吃早飯…）
3 充足的睡眠（早睡…）
4 學會溝通（交談，求助…）
Dear Lily，
Don't worry about your  study too much．First，you should             ．
I hope you can stay in a good mood nd study better．
Yours，
Sandy．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I think doing more sports is good for your health．
句中"doing more sports is good for your health"為賓語從句，其中"doing more sports"為動名詞短語做主語，謂語動詞要用單數(shù)形式，這句話意為：我認為多做運動對你的健康有好處．
高分句型二：
 I hope you can stay in a good mood and study better．
句中"you can stay in a good mood and study better"為賓語從句，句中短語"stay in a good mood"意為"保持好心情"．這句話意為：我希望你可以保持好心情，學習更好．

解答 Dear Lily，
    Don't worry about your study too much．（開篇點題）First，you should learn how to relax yourself．I think doing more sports is good for your health．【高分句型一】Listening to music is also a good way to relax．And I think it necessary to have healthy eating habits．Please remember to have breakfast every morning．It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning．You'd better go to bed early and have enough sleep．It will keep you active during the day．Finally I think you should talk with your friends，parents and teachers often．Tell them about your thoughts and feelings．Try to get help from them．（提出建議）
   I hope you can stay in a good mood and study better．（表達祝福）【高分句型二】
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Sandy

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．