Question

假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Bill來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾天氣情況如何。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀壳暗那闆r和你的做法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1．自去年冬天以來(lái)，無(wú)錫已發(fā)生多次霧霾天氣。霧霾對(duì)我們的日常生活已造成很大危害。

2．由于霧霾交通事故時(shí)有發(fā)生，許多人因?yàn)槲�入有毒的空氣而生病�?/span>

3．人們已認(rèn)識(shí)到保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性，政府正采取措施預(yù)防霧霾天氣的發(fā)生。

4．作為一名中學(xué)生，你將……。

參考詞匯：霧霾：smog 霧霾天氣 hazy weather 有毒的poisonous

注意：1. 短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；

2. 第4要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容須用2～3句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Bill,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog.

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Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Bill,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog.

Since last winter, the smog has happened many times in Wuxi. It has done great harm to our daily life. Traffic accidents often happen because of the smog. Many people get sick because they breathe in poisonous air. People have realized the importance of protecting the environment. The government is taking actions to prevent hazy weather happening.

As a middle school student, I will plant more trees and I won’t throw the waste anywhere. I will go to school by bike or on foot. (可參考的發(fā)揮要點(diǎn)I will ask my parents not to drive to work. I will ask more people to protect the environment as possible as they can.)

Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: done great harm to our daily life、because of the smog 、taking actions to prevent hazy weather happening、as possible as they can等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。