Question

20．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80-100詞．   
根據(jù)你是林林，你的表弟明明即將開始九年級忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)生活，為幫助他輕松愉快地度過這一年，請用英語給他發(fā)一個e-mail，內(nèi)容包括以下幾個方面：
1．生活方面（飲食、睡眠、運動等）
2．學(xué)習(xí)方面（在學(xué)校、在家里）
3．你對他的美好祝愿
Dear Mingming，
     I'm glad you'll be a student of Grade 9．You'll have a very busy life．But don't worry．I have some suggestions for you．
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                                                                               Yours，
                                                                               Linlin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．
高分句型：
①You had better get up early every morning and do some exercise to keep healthy．你最好每天早上早起鍛煉身體以保持健康．had better do sth最好做某事，后面跟動詞原形；do some exercise 做鍛煉．
②It is very important for you to eat clean and health food，do not eat any dirty things．吃干凈和健康的食物是非常重要的，不要吃任何臟東西．句子中It is important for sb to do sth對某人來說做某事是重要的，這里it作形式主語，to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語作真正的主語．

解答 Dear Mingming，
I'm glad you'll be a student of Grade 9．You'll have a very busy life．But don't worry．I have some suggestions for you．（引出話題）
First of all，you should have a good rest after a day's study and sleep on time．You had better get up early every morning and do some exercise to keep healthy（高分句型）．It is very important for you to eat clean and health food，do not eat any dirty things（高分句型）．（生活方面需要注意的事情）Secondly，you should listen to your teachers carefully in class and finish your homework by yourself when you go home．Don't be lazy and you will be a good student．（學(xué)習(xí)方面需要注意的問題）Finally，I hope you will have a good time during your study and when you have some questions，I can help you．（美好祝愿）

                                  Yours，
                                      Linlin

點評 本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．