Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

家有家規(guī)，校有校紀(jì)。父母為你制定了哪些家規(guī)？你在學(xué)校要遵守哪些校規(guī)？請(qǐng)選擇其中一個(gè)話題，首先描述這些規(guī)定；然后闡述你對(duì)其中一項(xiàng)規(guī)定的看法，并提出改善的建議。

注意：從下面所給的兩個(gè)題目中任選一個(gè)

字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。

Answer 1

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Possible version 1： At home 　　Every family has rules．Now I’ll tell you about my rules at home．I can’t go out on school nights, and I’m not allowed to play computer games even after I’ve finish my homework．But the most terrible rule I have is that I have to go to bed before 9 o’clock．I used to finish my homework at school when I was a pupil, but now I am a middle school student, and usually have more homework to do．So I can’t finish it by 10 o’clock．I think I should be allowed to go to bed later, let’s say, by 11 o’clock． 　　Possible version 2： At school 　　There are a lot of rules in our school．For example, we can’t eat in classrooms, and we are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school, and so on．I think most of them are good for us, but some are not．One of the rules I hate most is that we have to wear school uniforms at school．I think we should be allowed to wear our own clothes．It makes us feel happier．If we can’t wear our own clothes at school, we should be allowed to design our school uniforms．It will make both teachers and students happy． 　　評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 　　第一檔：(13～15分) 　　完全符合題目要求，表達(dá)思想清楚，內(nèi)容豐富。使用多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯，語(yǔ)言通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，具有邏輯性。 　　第二檔：(9～12分) 　　基本符合題目要求，表達(dá)思想基本清楚，內(nèi)容完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語(yǔ)言基本通順，語(yǔ)意基本連貫。有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體理解。 　　第三檔：(5～8分) 　　部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，內(nèi)容不夠完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，語(yǔ)言不通順，影響整體理解。 　　第四檔：(0～4分) 　　與題目有關(guān)內(nèi)容不多，只是簡(jiǎn)單拼湊提示詞語(yǔ)，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容難以理解。