Question

【題目】情景作文（1個大題，滿分15分）根據(jù)提示和要求，寫一篇短文。將短文寫在答題卡情景作文空白處。

某中學(xué)網(wǎng)站提出“走路去上學(xué)”的倡議，請你就這一話題寫一篇約80-100詞的英語短文。

內(nèi)容提示：

1. 走路有利于健康安全；

2. 和同學(xué)結(jié)伴可以互相了解，相互幫助；

3. 不需要父母接送，學(xué)會自理；

4. 道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵；

5. 有利于保護(hù)環(huán)境；

要求：

1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清楚，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及姓名，否則不予評分。

3. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

參考詞匯：

be good for 有利于， each other 互相， no longer不再， crowded 擁堵

Walking to school

I think walking to school is good for us.

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Answer 1

【答案】 Walking to school

I think walking to school is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it's good for health. Next, it's fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What's more, if we walk, our parents won't have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won't be as crowded as they are now. Walking to school helps us protect the environment as well. I hope more and more students will walk to school.

【解析】

試題分析：這是篇提綱作文。題中給出了寫作的要點(diǎn)，寫作時一定要注意要點(diǎn)的齊全，并可適當(dāng)展開擴(kuò)充；句子之間可加入一些承接性的句子來加強(qiáng)文章的連貫性和邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流暢。文中用了一些常用的表達(dá)方式，如：walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it's good for health. 步行到學(xué)校是一種鍛煉的好方法，它對健康有好處。walking to school為動名詞短語作主語。另外，文中用來一些承接性的詞語，如First of all 首先；Next 接下來；What's more另外。