Question

俗話說“失去了才懂得珍惜”。時間過得很快，你們即將初中畢業(yè)。同學，你是否在學習上有一些讓你感到遺憾或后悔的事情呢？如果在過去三年中，你某學科弱；你錯過了很多機會；假如再給你一次機會，你會盡最大努力學習嗎？比如：課前預習、上課聽講、及時復習、認真作業(yè)……
請你以“Give Me One More Chance”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，告訴我們你的想法。開頭已給出，不計入單詞總數(shù)。
溫馨提示: 1.短文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點或所在學校名稱。
2.這些單詞或短語也許對你有幫助：be weak in，regret(后悔)，what if，never too late to learn，preview（預習），practice, go over, as … as possible, try one’s best
Give Me One More Chance
How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.
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Answer 1

Give Me One More Chance
How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.
Now, I am leaving our school. I want to enter a good school, but I am weak in English. I regret that I haven’t learned English well in the past three years. I missed many chances. What if I had another chance?
As the saying goes, “It’s never too late to learn”. If I had one more chance, I would practice listening, reading, speaking and writing as much as possible. I would preview lessons before classes, listen carefully in class, go over lessons and finish my homework on time.
I believe where there is a will, there is a way. I will try my best to learn it well.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般過去及現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:be weak in在某方面不行；what if假使……將會怎樣；as much as possible盡可能的；go over復習；on time按時；try one’s best to do盡力做某事等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。