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18．假如你班要就"如何為中考做準(zhǔn)備"開一個(gè)主題班會(huì)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)中考過程中要注意的事項(xiàng)以及建議理由：
1．保持良好情緒．不焦慮，不緊張，否則會(huì)沒有面對(duì)困難的勇氣．
2．明確目標(biāo)，學(xué)會(huì)規(guī)劃．太低的目標(biāo)使人懶散，太高的目標(biāo)使人失去信心．
3．多與父母、老師、同學(xué)交流溝通，以便幫忙走出困境．
4．勞逸結(jié)合，以保持旺盛精力．
5．自擬一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文通順連貫；
3．參考詞匯：信心confidence  n．
Boys and girls，the final exams are coming．What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams？Here are some suggestions．
Firstly，it's very important for us to be ingood moods．Don't be nervous or stressed．Otherwise，we will not have thecourage to face difficulties．Secondly，we should have proper aims and learn toplan well．If we aim too low，we may become lazy．If we aim too high，we maylose confidence．Thirdly，we'd better have more communication with our parents，teachers and classmates．They can help us get out of trouble．Fourthly，keeping a good balance between study and rest canmake us energetic．Finally，a healthy diet is very useful as well．
With these done，I believe we can be successful in the exams．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀銓?duì)中考過程中要注意的事項(xiàng)以及建議理由．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．保持良好情緒．不焦慮，不緊張，否則會(huì)沒有面對(duì)困難的勇氣．
2．明確目標(biāo)，學(xué)會(huì)規(guī)劃．太低的目標(biāo)使人懶散，太高的目標(biāo)使人失去信心．
3．多與父母、老師、同學(xué)交流溝通，以便幫忙走出困境．
4．勞逸結(jié)合，以保持旺盛精力．
5．自擬一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
otherwise 否則
learn to do sth 學(xué)會(huì)做某事
lose confidence 失去信心
had better do sth 最好做某事
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
make sb+adj讓某人怎么樣
as well 也
【高分句型】
1．Firstly，①it's very important for us to be②in good moods．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．
②in good moods好心情
2．Fourthly，①keeping a good balance②between study and rest can ③make us energetic
①動(dòng)名詞短語做主語，keep balance保持平衡．
②between …and …兩者之間．
③make sb+adj讓某人怎么樣

解答 Boys and girls，the final exams are coming．What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams？Here are somesuggestions．
Firstly，it's very important for us to be in good moods．【高分句型】Don't be nervous or stressed．Otherwise，we will not have the courage to face difficulties．（保持良好情緒．不焦慮，不緊張，否則會(huì)沒有面對(duì)困難的勇氣）Secondly，we should have proper aims and learn to plan well．If we aim too low，we may become lazy．If we aim too high，we may lose confidence．（明確目標(biāo)，學(xué)會(huì)規(guī)劃．太低的目標(biāo)使人懶散，太高的目標(biāo)使人失去信心）Thirdly，we'd better have more communication with our parents，teachers and classmates．They can help us get out of trouble．（多與父母、老師、同學(xué)交流溝通，以便幫忙走出困境）Fourthly，keeping a good balance between study and rest can make us energetic．【高分句型】（勞逸結(jié)合，以保持旺盛精力）Finally，a healthy diet is very useful as well．（自擬觀點(diǎn)：健康飲食也很有用）
With these done，I believe we can besuccessful in the exams．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出．寫作時(shí)先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，要結(jié)合活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)．