Question

16．電子產(chǎn)品的使用越來越低齡化，連幾個月的寶寶也癡迷不能自已．上網(wǎng)學(xué)習(xí)和做作業(yè)的情況也越來越多．請結(jié)合你的所見所聞和自己的經(jīng)歷，寫一篇英文作文．
內(nèi)容包括：1你見到的使用電子產(chǎn)品的情況（如手機(jī)、電腦等）；
2你自己使用電子產(chǎn)品的情況；
3你對電子產(chǎn)品的看法．
要    求：1表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；
2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；
380詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】、
Electronic products are becoming more and more popular today電子產(chǎn)品變得越來越流行．
比較級+and+比較級：越來越…
【高分句型二】
When I am tired，I prefer to listen to some songs on the computer to relax myself當(dāng)我累了，我更喜歡在電腦上聽一些歌曲放松自己，
when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．

解答 Electronic products are becoming more and more popular today．【高分句型一】Some babies are even interested in them．
Almost all students in our class have mobile phones．They call their parents，listen to music and chat with their friends．（見到的使用電子產(chǎn)品的情況）For students，we are asked to study and finish our homework online．As for me，I like to search the Internet for more information if I have some difficulty with study．When I am tired，I prefer to listen to some songs on the computer to relax myself【高分句型二】．（自己使用電子產(chǎn)品的情況）
Every coin has two sides，and electronic products also have advantages and disadvantages．If necessary，we can ask our parents or teachers for help in order to use them in a correct way．（對電子產(chǎn)品的看法）

點評 題目中給出的材料較為齊全．動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順．為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞