Question

假如你是趙洋，你想要假如江蘇觀鳥協(xié)會。請根據(jù)申請表內(nèi)容完成80詞左右的申請信.

Name	Zhao Yang	Date of birth	2000年10月20日
Telephone number	0518--87260039	Email	8243657@qq.com
School	Sunshine Middle school	Grade	8
Favourite subjects	生物、英語	Interests and hobbies	收集各種動物圖片、聽音樂
Activities to protect wildlife		去年春天和朋友一起去扎龍自然保護(hù)區(qū)參加了保護(hù)鳥類的活動。
reasons	喜愛大自然，對植物動物感興趣， 想要更多的了解鳥，人們砍伐樹，鳥越來越少，想做些事情來保護(hù)鳥
Free time	每周六下午2點到5點

注意：書寫工整, 段落分明。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
                                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang

Answer 1

Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
My name is Zhao Yang. I was born on 20th October, 2000. I’m in Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle school. My favourite subjects are biology and English. My interests and hobbies are collecting the pictures of all kinds of animals and listening to music. I love nature and I’m very interested in animals and plants. I also want to know more about birds. Because I learned that the number of birds is becoming smaller and smaller, so I want to do some things to protect them. Last Spring my classmates and I went to Zhalong reserve to take part in the activity of protecting animals.. And I’m free between two and five O’clock every Saturday afternoon.
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 0518--87260039 or e-mail me at 8243657@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封應(yīng)聘信。由于給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
【亮點說明】這篇短文語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，準(zhǔn)確地闡明了自己基本愛好和特長，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息，符合應(yīng)聘信的格式和要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含復(fù)合形容詞的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如the number of birds， I’m very interested in animals and plants，I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club.學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。