Question

很多人認為當今的中學生有自己鮮明的特點。他們多才多藝，擅長琴棋書畫；同時也常常以自我為中心，很少為他人著想。作為中學生，你認為自己最大的優(yōu)點是什么？（請舉例說明），缺點是什么？（請舉例說明）。你應該如何揚長避短，做最好的自己？
要求：1．詞數(shù)80左右。 文章標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2．短文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校。
3．注意不要遺漏要點。
It’s said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points.
__________________________________________________________________________________         
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________ 

Answer 1

It is said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points. They are good at many things, for example, music, drawing, sports. But they are also thought to be selfish. They often think about themselves.
I have many advantages and I think the biggest is that I am willing to help others. I remember once I played basketball with my friends. Suddenly, one of my friends fell and was hurt. I sent him to hospital at once.
Of course I have many disadvantages. I don’t work hard at my studies and always play computer games. So I am not good at my subjects. My teacher said to me I was clever, but I didn’t put my heart into it. I know my disadvantages. So I want correct them. I think I can overcome my shortcomings. I will work hard at my lessons and try to make progress.

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們對現(xiàn)在自己的特點寫一篇議論文�，F(xiàn)在的中學生多才多藝，但同時也有很多缺點，如以自我為中心，不為他人著想等。對于你自己來說，你身上也會有優(yōu)點和缺點，你的優(yōu)點是什么，你的缺點又是什么，用例子來說明。另外，怎樣根據(jù)你的優(yōu)點和缺點，揚長避短，做最好的自己。這個題目只是給了我們這篇短文的主要內容，我們還需自己將它補充完整，使內容豐富。我們需要用正確的英語把這些內容翻譯出來，同時還需注意表達得完整和流暢，注意使用正確的時態(tài)。
【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作文中作者首先點明了現(xiàn)在中學生的特點，他們有很多優(yōu)點，但是也有很多缺點。接下來，作者寫了自己的優(yōu)點，并舉了一個實例來說明自己的這個優(yōu)點；下一段中作者寫了自己的缺點，也舉例說明。最后作者決定發(fā)揚優(yōu)點，改正缺點，做更好的中學生。整篇短文的結構完整，內容也很充實。短文中也使用了一些好的句型和短語，如But they are also thought to be selfish、I have many advantages and I think the biggest is that I am willing to help others、I know my disadvantages. So I want correct them.等。