Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

中國在世界上所起的作用越來越大，在其重要作用的推動(dòng)下，漢語熱居高不下。假設(shè)你是大明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封80詞左右的郵件，為你的美國筆友Frank提供一些學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。首尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

要點(diǎn)：1. 看中文電視、讀中文書、報(bào)紙、雜志；

2. 學(xué)唱漢語歌，有助于記住漢語詞匯；

3. 交中國朋友，即可練習(xí)口語又可了解中國；

4. …

Dear Frank,

You asked me for advice on how to learn Chinese well.

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Yours,

Daming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Frank,

You asked me for advice on how to learn Chinese well. Chinese is a beautiful language, but it isn’t easy to learn it well. Here are some tips：

First, as a foreign, you need to go and join a Chinese learning activity group； the most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Second, if you want to improve your listening ability, you’d better read Chinese books, listen to the tapes and radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs. Third, you make some Chinese friends. Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some Chinese festivals to you, too.Would you like to write e-mails to me in Chinese? I can help you.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Daming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示寫一封80詞左右的郵件。所給材料比較詳細(xì)，提示調(diào)理清晰，我們要做的就是用英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文要注意人稱的變化，時(shí)態(tài)的搭配以及主謂一致，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上注意使用多種句式，同時(shí)還使用了表示次序的連接詞，First, Second, Third,使文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。此外，復(fù)合句的使用；if you want to improve your listening ability, you’d better read Chinese books, listen to the tapes and radio programs in Chinese.使文章內(nèi)容更為豐富。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。