Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（共1題，計(jì)10分）

假如你是Peter， 根據(jù)表格信息介紹你自己的情況，開(kāi)頭已給出，不算入字?jǐn)?shù)。要求：語(yǔ)句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)：60-80詞左右。

Name: Peter	Age(年齡): 13
Nationality(國(guó)籍): Chinese	School: Qujiang No.1 High School
Family: parents, sister and I	Likes(喜歡): play soccer
Dislikes(不喜歡): watch TV	Tel: 87876556

My name is Peter.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My name is Peter. I am 13 years old. I am a Chinese boy. I study at Qujiang No.1 High School. There are four people in my family, my parents , my sister and I. I like playing soccer. I think playing soccer is very interesting. But I don’t like watching TV, because it is boring. My telephone number is 87876556. If you want to make friends with me, you can call me.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，Peter的自我介紹。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My name is……，I am ...，There are ...，I think ...，But I don’t like...以及If you want ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，完整地表達(dá)提綱中所列內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的名字叫Peter，接下來(lái)介紹我的年齡、國(guó)籍、所在學(xué)校、家人和喜好，最后介紹自己的電話號(hào)碼，希望有人打電話和我交朋友。此處like doing sth, play soccer, watch TV, want to do sth, make friends with sb等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。