Question

10．Write at least 60words about the topic"My opinion on copying others'homework"（以"我對(duì)抄襲他們?nèi)俗鳂I(yè)的看法"為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格．）
注意：
1短文必須包含下列三大點(diǎn)；
2第一至第三要點(diǎn)必須包含1--2個(gè)列表中所給詞語(yǔ)，但第三點(diǎn)要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3短文標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

（1）The main reason（主要原因）	A large amout of homework，difficult to work out，lazy
（2）The harms（危害）	a bad habit，be against the rules of the school
（3）Your views（你的看法）	be honest，work hard

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．）
My opinion on copying others'homeworkIt is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．There areseveral reasons for this phenomenon．The main reason is that alarge amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday．Although copyingothers'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finishthe endless exercises，in fact，it really doesharm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to thinkover difficult questions．As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should notonly be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well．As a saying goes"practice makes perfect"．If we keep practicing andreviewing our lessons through doing homework，we can do a goodjob in our exams．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"My opinion on copying others'homework"為題說(shuō)說(shuō)抄襲作業(yè)的原因和危害．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一、三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．主要原因；作業(yè)多，難，懶惰
2．危害；壞習(xí)慣，違反學(xué)校規(guī)則
3．你的看法；誠(chéng)實(shí)，努力學(xué)習(xí)

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
work out 解答出
do sb a favor 幫忙
stay up 熬夜
do harm to 對(duì)…有害
not only…but …不僅…而且…

【高分句型】
1．It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．
it作為形式主語(yǔ)，that從句作為真正主語(yǔ)
2．The main reason is①that alarge amount of homework ②which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday．
①that從句作為表語(yǔ)，和is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)
②which是關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，which作為主語(yǔ)，修飾先行詞homework．
3．①As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should②not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well．
①As far as I am concerned 就我而言
②not only…but …不僅…而且…

解答 My opinion on copying others'homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．【高分句型】There are several reasons for this phenomenon．The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday．（主要原因；作業(yè)多，難，）【高分句型】Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises，in fact，it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions．（危害；壞習(xí)慣，違反規(guī)則）
As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well．【高分句型】As a saying goes"practice makes perfect"．If we keep practicing and reviewing our lessons through doing homework，we can do a good job in our exams．（你的看法；誠(chéng)實(shí)，努力學(xué)習(xí)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文，文章的題目已經(jīng)給出，而且列出了三條細(xì)節(jié)．寫(xiě)作文時(shí)要仔細(xì)審題，每一條都要寫(xiě)到．要注意前后句的連接，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題．寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
文章主要寫(xiě)我對(duì)抄襲作業(yè)的看法，要點(diǎn)全部都寫(xiě)出，并且增加了一些內(nèi)容使文章更通順，更符合要求．文中使用很多短語(yǔ)，讓文章更加出彩，如It is known to us all that，a large amount of．，stay up late，As far as I am concerned，As a saying goes"practice makes perfect"等．在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中，要注意點(diǎn)滴積累，這樣在寫(xiě)作文時(shí)才能靈活運(yùn)用．